Currently, the advancement of technology has played an important role in human society. Therefore, the internet has become effective resources and has globally released many useful informations on the social media for people development. The following paragraph will demonstrate how can all information on the internet be trusted and how to control it.
First of all, the information on the media is not always reliable because they have several resources on the social media, so people should analysis the sites of the information that it look reliable or not. One obvious example is that there are some websites on the internet has released the fake news and the advertisements which can attract people to visit their page and expect the visitors to support them by following their website or buying their products. Therefore, people should check the information on the internet intensively.
On the other hand, people can control the volume of information online by stop sharing unreliable sources. For instance, when people found unreliable information on the internet, they should not comment, share or like that news or advertising because if people do all that actions, the unreliable sources will be wide spaced on the social media immediately. Therefore, people have to be careful about social media activities.
In conclusion, due to there are various sites on the internet universe, so people who use the social media should know about where the online information came from and if it is unreliable resources how can people handle this situation.
- Anyone can post information on the internet Some people say most of what we read on the Internet is inaccurate To what extent do you agree or disagree 80
- The plans show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words. 56
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? 73
- Some people think that having people from different nationalities and cultural backgrounds living together in the same country makes the country develop faster. Do you agree? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26720647773 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81051570151 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514170040486 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.4064118076 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.1 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212881373822 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989907806713 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520566051539 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146075373354 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0101587375702 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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