Population growth

Essay topics:

Population growth

Population today is a serious issue on the globe. Because it leads to variable problems to the human society. There are many effects on the human society. It is interlinked with many factors like food production in the world.

As we see the above bar graph, there are measures of the population of comutries like India,China,USA and Japan around the years 1950,2002,2050.

From the information given, india had population percentage of 15 in 1950. And it increased to nearly 17 in 2002. And now it is estimated that India's percentage of population would be around 19 in 2050.

USA had population percentage of 6.5 in 1950. And there is a tremendous decrease in the percentage upto 5 in 2002. And by the latest census it is expected that the population percentage would be maintained 5.

Japan had population percentage of 4 in 1950. And there is a decrease in the percentage upto 3 in 2002. And by the latest census it is expected that the population percentage would decrease further upto 1.

And China had population percentage of 22 in 1950. And there is a tremendous decrease in the percentage upto 20 in 2002. And by the latest census it is expected that the population percentage would decrease further upto 15.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... today is a serious issue on the globe. Because it leads to variable problems to the hu...
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Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , China
...f the population of comutries like India,China,USA and Japan around the years 1950,200...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ntage would decrease further upto 1. And China had population percentage of 22 i...
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Line 11, column 52, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ad population percentage of 22 in 1950. And there is a tremendous decrease in the p...
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Line 11, column 122, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ease in the percentage upto 20 in 2002. And by the latest census it is expected tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84360189573 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97357015206 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.398104265403 0.547539520022 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 0.482926829268 1864% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0227380867 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.1176470588 112.824112599 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.4117647059 22.9334400587 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.117647058824 5.23603664747 2% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199705193375 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916649115623 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802649715827 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134077404506 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338535261786 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.9 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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