Populations
The line chart provides information about the reported and predicted increase in populations in China and India within 50 years. Generally, the number of people in two countries shows exponential growth with bell-shaped variables.
Specifically, the population discrepancy in both countries gradually increased for the first 25 years following by a steady decay. In China, for instance, the peak of the total population is anticipated to be in 2025 with approximately 1450 million people and then move down to 1400 million people in 2050. Meanwhile, for India, the tendency stayed more constant and balanced with a rise of about 600 million people in 50 years.
It is obvious from the two bell-shaped curve that the resident growth in the 2 countries is supposed to be symmetric in both sides of 2025. While the statistics for China is likely to climb to the peak in 2025 and then go downward, India’s total population will go up from 2000 to 2025, twice that from 2025 to 2050.
- Populations 73
- In many countries children are engaged in different kinds of paid work Some people regard this as completely wrong while others consider it a valuable work experience important for learning and taking responsibility What is your opinion 73
- Genetic engineering is a dangerous trend It should be limited To what extent do you agree 75
- Genetic engineering is a dangerous trend It should be limited To what extent do you agree 89
- Some people think that the fictional violence portrayed on television is harmless entertainment Others disagree and think that it encourages violent behaviour Discuss both these view and give your own opinion 93
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99393939394 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84153892008 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.1502721725 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.714285714 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1876211116 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934075708938 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842244560043 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13425140023 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313108426305 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.