Process

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Process

The picture describes the process of making orange juice

Overall, the process comprises a number of steps, beginning with delivering fresh oranges and ending with distributing the products to shops and supermarkets.

At the beginning of the process, fresh oranges are collected and transported to factory where they are washed and extracted. After being extracted, the leftover become food for animals while juice is processed in two different ways. The first one is to package and deliver straight to shops.

The second way is to transport juice by a refrigerator truck to another factory to evaporate. Once experienced the process of evaporation, water is removed and concentrate juice is obtained, after which it is canned and then continue to be shipped to the warehouse. At the final stage of the process, this concentrate juice is mixed with water in a factory before being packaged and ready for sale.

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