Process Applying for a driving license in the US

Essay topics:

Process: Applying for a driving license in the US.

The given flow chart describes how people in the US acquire a driving license. The process includes two separate phases: before paying fees and after paying fees, each of which involves three main steps.

To commence with, license takers have to arrive at the driving license center in person. Here they fill in all required forms and then carry on to take an eyesight test. Anyone failing this test are not allowed to get a license, while those who pass proceed with fees payment.

After successfully paying service charge, two distinct exams are to be passed in order to get the driver’s license. The first one is a written exam, test takers have the maximum of three attempts to take it. Those who exceeds three fails are required to repay fees to sit the test again. Successful examinees continue on with the road exam, in which test takers drive actual cars. The assessment in this test is similar to the previous one, ones did not success pay another sum to redo the writing test, whereas qualified road examinees obtain their own driving licenses.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'Anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'fails'.
Suggestion: fails
...rry on to take an eyesight test. Anyone failing this test are not allowed to get a lice...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8087431694 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20394104885 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644808743169 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2684056005 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122595215611 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514560223817 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693991182177 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935588825837 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404444259404 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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