Process of making olive oil.
The rendered information in context with the different stages which are undergone for the manufacturing of the olive oil is expounded by the process chart. The whole process comprises of seven steps, beginning from Pickling and ending at sales of olive oil.
To commence with, in the first stage , the olives are plucked from the olive trees manually. Next to it, the fresh olives which are picked from the trees are washed with cold water thoroughly and cleaned properly. In the next stage, the olives are transferred on the belt for smashing purpose. The olives are put on the smashing device . Consequently , the entire material is extracted in two parts, which are olive paste and olive stones. There is no function of olive stones in the further process. Therefore, olive stones are discarded.
Scrutinising further, in the following step , olive paste is filled in the bags which contained numerous holes. In the subsequent step, the bag is pressed in a squeezing apparatus before being separated. As a result, the maximum amount of olive oil is taken out. Further, the liquid is added into a separating device to separate the water and oil. Lastly, the oil is extracted and filled in the bottles. The packed bottles are sent for sale.
The whole process is simple and involving some relevant steps which are very necessary for extracting oil from olive oils.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, lastly, so, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.0 286% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02620087336 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54718770215 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53711790393 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 13.0 4.33902439024 300% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9055822582 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.9375 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3125 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.09268292683 318% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410061051475 0.215688989381 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148397440198 0.103423049105 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880828070967 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27171259195 0.15604864568 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615865422744 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.