Process of making wool
The given illustration demonstrates how the wool is manufactured
Generally speaking, the process contains 14 stages commencing with selecting qualify sheep and terminating in manufacturing for individual pastime and commercial purpose, Additionally, The process is artificial and linear process
In detail, The sheep, which have thick fleeces, are chosen to shear. Then, the thick fleeces are cleaned carefully, before drying in the sun for a while. At the sub sequence stage, the furs are rotated, before producing primary product being Wool as well as by-product string. After that, string is recycled while the wool is continued.
At the following state, The wool is braided in order to become tufts of wool. Then, after being stored, tufts of wood are employed to produce balls of yarn which are useful for many purposes. finally, Balls of yarn are used in knitting such as individual pastime while the productions such as carpets and jackets are employed for commercial purposes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
...arn which are useful for many purposes. finally, Balls of yarn are used in knitting suc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, then, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39102564103 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78829943531 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602564102564 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 98.1859959257 43.030603864 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 120.142857143 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 5.23603664747 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208648863487 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910083860593 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907880470124 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126246463635 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437208874248 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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