The process of milk production
Given is the diagram depicting the process of producing milk.
It is conspicuous that the linear process has multiple steps, from milking machine being used twice a day, through various processing steps, to processed- milk being delivered to (some places such as) supermarkets and shops.
To prepare for the whole process, cows are fed on the grass and after that they are sent to a cowshed. The first step of making milk is obtaining raw milk by using machinery and then it is stored in refrigeration to prevent it from spoiling. In the subsequent step, milk container is in the tank and brought to the dairy systems.
In the fourth stage of the process, after being carried to the processing factory, milk is pasteurized and packaged carefully into bottles for sale. Simultaneously, milk is produced to make cheese, butter and cream. Finally, milk is packed appropriately and transported to a number of distinct locations where consumers may purchase it, such as supermarkets and stores.
- Some people say history is one the most important school subjects Other people think that in today s world subjects like science and technology are more important than history Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 84
- The two pictures show a typical japanese office and a typical american office Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
- Some people work for the same organization all their working life Others think that it is better to work for different organizations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 56
- Some people think it is better for one single legal system throughout the world Others say countries should have their own law To what extent do you agree or disagree 64
- Businesses should hire employees for their entire lives Do you agree or disagree 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, may, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05487804878 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85524111839 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615853658537 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4664182898 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.625 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425798580957 0.215688989381 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18750399358 0.103423049105 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943078912395 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288999732271 0.15604864568 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356109856179 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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