A recent survey shows the number of people travelling through london s underground station boarding victoria terminal at different times of the day

Essay topics:

A recent survey shows the number of people travelling through london 's underground station boarding victoria terminal at different times of the day.

The liner charts revea that information of representation the number of dweller traveling through london' s underground station boarding victoria terminal at different times of the day.

Moving a quick glance on the illustration ,100 person are traveling in 6 a.m. Hence, dweller are mostly use the travelling in 9 a.m and it is very fall up ratio in the chart in 400. Afterthat, people travel is decline in 10:30a.m to12 p.m.

To trigger with, dwellers are not like to travelling in 3 pm to 4 pm. Otherwise, this time is very plummet travelling all age group in 150. Then, the evening time dweller umpteen travelling one to another place in 6pm to 8pm to 400 ratio. Last, the night time is reduce the travel in road to 8pm to 10pm.

To sum up, person are interest traveling in 9 am and 6 pm to 7 pm. Dweller are not interest travel time 10 am to 12 pm and 4pm to 5pm.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, then, well, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 715.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41358024691 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6367853142 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4690622975 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.375 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288569907062 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132743086646 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156840313532 0.0843802449381 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20836992559 0.15604864568 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.195335315312 0.0819641961636 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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