recycle glass
The given picture illustrates the process of producing of recycle glass in detail stages.
It is clear from the diagram that there three big stages in the production of recycle glass, beginning with collecting used bottles and ending with selling the products to supermarkets.
In the first stages, great deal of used bottles are collected to the collection point, then these bottles are moved to cleaning plant. Following that, these bottles are washed by high pressurised water, and then clean bottles being classify into brown, green and clear before it is carried on the glass factory.
In the glass factory, used bottles are crushed to glass pieces which is put in to the furnace at high temperature to become glass liquid. This liquid and fresh glass liquid stream are mixed and these mixture be shaped into new bottles by moulds. Finally, the new bottles are filled in the package and delivered to supermarkets for commercial purpose.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 195, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this mixture' or 'these mixtures'?
Suggestion: this mixture; these mixtures
...fresh glass liquid stream are mixed and these mixture be shaped into new bottles by moulds. F...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13461538462 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46376601933 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8544302711 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.428571429 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301980857786 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15053681879 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13028683078 0.0843802449381 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209983435749 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10620331528 0.0819641961636 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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