environment protection
People argued that the only governments have the power to solve environmental issues, which I don’t agree. I think that protecting our planet is the responsibility of both governments and individuals.
humans are damaging the environment by a great deal of way, which are air pollution and waste. Gas emissions from industries and exhaust fumes from vehicle lead to global warming, which may have a devastating affect to the earth in the future. Additionally, human population is increasing day by day, we are also producing greater quantities of waste, which pollutes river and oceans.
On the one hand, national governments make more effort to solve environmental problems. They could introduce laws to limit emissions from all factories or to force companies use renewable energy such as solar, wind and water energy. they could impose Green taxs on driver, companies. Beside that government should encourage to use these public transport instead of private car and take to fewer flights abroad.
For individual, they also have a responsibility to protect the environment as their national government. For instance, they can use the fossil energy right way and save that energy. they can buy machines which save more energy such as lighting or washer saving electricity. Moreover, individual could be combined with governments to protect the environment, which they don’t produce wood higher quantities products or other ways of the forests.
In conclusion, protection of the environment is not only national government responsibility but also individual. both governments and individuals have to combine together to protect our planet. All of you have power to protect the environment.
- Restoration of old buildings in main cities involves enormous government expenditure. It would be more beneficial to spend this money to build new houses and roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include examples 11
- making bread 78
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- process of making bread 75
- study abroad 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, moreover, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53787878788 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05906802039 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9429668709 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.375 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214460185158 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853826763382 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114730543393 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135773031819 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130287072528 0.056905535591 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.