the results of a research, which examines the average percentage marks secured by boys and girls of different ages in several School subjects, are given below.
The tables describe the percentage scores achieved in the educational subjects by children at different ages by different genders.
Overall, sport was the subject that boys mark the highest average percentage while for girls was the science.It is also clear that for boys language had the lowest proportion and for girl the data for sport was lowest.
As can be seen from the table , the subjects for which the highest average prorpotion were 78 percent for male , and languages, at 75 percent for female.The strongest subject for each gender was revealed to be the weakest for the opposite sex such as 58 percent for man and 60 percent for girls respectively.Looking into other subjects but geography , the difference for both girls and boys is not really significant and fluctuated around 2 or 3 percent .
The figures show geography is the subject beside sports and languages demonstrated apparently the distinguish that male always achieved better average percentage marks than female about slightly 3 percent. The highest percentage in geography belonged to man with 70 percent at aged 13 years old which is 6 percent higher than the highest statistics for girls at 10 and 14 years old .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08673469388 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87788476787 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566326530612 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.39594349 43.030603864 264% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 199.4 112.824112599 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.2 22.9334400587 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8 5.23603664747 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153914729461 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104082046572 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030362039875 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116095438057 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303030240183 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 13.2329268293 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.