the sales made by a coffee shop in a a office building on a typical weekday

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the sales made by a coffee shop in a a office building on a typical weekday

The table gives information about the sales made by a coffee shop in a office building on a typical weekday. There were 4 types of product in that coffee shop will be figured out and measured in unit. The table also presents the times of sale which the morning time for breakfast was 7.30-10.30, brunch time was 10.30- 2.30, lunch was at 2.30-5.30, and dinner marked at 5.30- 8.30. Overall, as can be seen that the best selling product in the coffee shop was in their coffees menu whilst the smallest sales happened to be in tea products.

Regarding to the data, the coffee lovers were causing the coffee sales became the most positive movement trend which sold 265 cups of coffee in the early morning, 185 cups in the brunch time, 145 cups in the lunch time, and another 200 cups in dinner. The second highest sales was thoroughly in pastries which sold 275 units for breakfast, 95 units spent by brunch lovers, 150 units paid off in lunch and 80 units spent for dinner respectively.

Another menu that offered by the coffee shop was sandwiches. People bought it off their breakfast counted in 50 units and the sales was higher in brunch hour which marked at 200 units. Then it followed by in the lunch tine which the smallest sales in entire day because 110 units of sandwich sold in dinner. Furthermore, the smallest sales happened to be in tea products especially in the morning which counted at 110 cups of tea for breakfast. The sales was also getting lower as the day goes by, 50 cups of tea sold for brunch and even lower in lunch time which at 35 cups. Differently happened in dinner hour, the tea sales went up to 75 cups sold for relaxing the tea lovers night.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...bout the sales made by a coffee shop in a office building on a typical weekday. T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, regarding, second, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 965.302439024 142% => OK
No of words: 304.0 196.424390244 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51973684211 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24340175945 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453947368421 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.0 283.868780488 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6104126934 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239736526292 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127891774401 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.182286350013 0.0843802449381 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162904905706 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.092090022184 0.0819641961636 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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