the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday

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the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday

The table gives information about the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. There were 4 types of product offered at the coffee shop and the sales were segregating a weekday into four timings which were morning at 7.30-10.30, noon at 10.30-2.30, afternoon at 2.30-5.30, and evening at 5.30-8.30. Overall, as can be seen that best sales of the coffee shop remined in the coffee and it coupled witn pastry. Differently, the tea and sandwiches marked as the smallest sales.

Regarding to the data, the coffee lovers were causing the coffee sales became the most positive movement trend which sold 265 cups of coffee in the early morning, 185 cups in the brunch time, 145 cups in the lunch time, and another 200 cups in dinner. The second highest sales was thoroughly in pastries which sold 275 units for breakfast, 95 units spent by brunch lovers, 150 units paid off in lunch and 80 units spent for dinner respectively.

Another menu that offered by the coffee shop was sandwiches. People bought it off their breakfast counted in 50 units and the sales was higher in brunch hour which marked at 200 units. Then it followed by in the lunch tine which the smalles sales in entire day because 110 units of sandwich sold in dinner. Furthermore, the smallst sales happened to be in tea products especially in the morning which counted at 110 cups of tea for breakfast. The sales was also getting lower as the day goes by, 50 cups of tea sold for brunch and wven lower in lunch time which at 35 cups. Differently happened in dinner hour, the tea sales went up to 75 cups sold for relaxing the tea lovers night.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, regarding, second, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 965.302439024 140% => OK
No of words: 293.0 196.424390244 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60409556314 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37846006932 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 106.607317073 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484641638225 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 381.6 283.868780488 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.326053738 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.416666667 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260020093783 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124556133273 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.191037504723 0.0843802449381 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169050961604 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109653484614 0.0819641961636 134% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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