Some believe that people should get a job right after school. Others say they should attend university. Discuss both views
and state your opinion.
Some people hold the opinion that people try to find a job afterwards the school, while rest of the people believes that higher education is very essential before commencing the job. I, however, believe that higher education plays most significant role throughout the duration of job.
To begin with, I would like to outline the advantages of education that actually is far beneficial for every individual whether they do job, business or something else. Many adepts assert that the university where people come to get higher education is more noteworthy place to improve their interpersonal skills by meeting different people with several cultures. Moreover, some pedagogical expert thinks that University is like a mini universe where people meet with different professionals of different countries and organization which eventually is far beneficial for those students who are going to start their professional life. Along with, in higher education number of subject are very useful for students to learn various techniques and concepts which play substantial part in professional career.
On the other hand, early job has many adverse consequences which is not suitable for students as well as it ruin their lives as well. One of the obvious disadvantages of start early job is that students cannot focus completely on their education which ultimately impacts on their future. Alongside, most of the students have become addicted of earning money at their early age instead of studying. Apart from this, in third world countries mostly students are paying full efforts with their job and studies which is unfair for them from the government. At last, government need to provide opportunity for those students who are keen to learn but cannot study owing to inadequacy of money.
To sum up, people need to focus on their education first instead of start early age job which is rudimentary step towards the success. Whereas, government also need to look an eye on those student who are keen to learn but could not study due to financial problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this student' or 'those students'?
Suggestion: this student; those students
... government also need to look an eye on those student who are keen to learn but could not stu...
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Line 7, column 266, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uld not study due to financial problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, third, well, whereas, while, apart from, as well as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 3.15609756098 570% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 5.60731707317 410% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 965.302439024 179% => OK
No of words: 332.0 196.424390244 169% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20180722892 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69679593279 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 106.607317073 173% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55421686747 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 283.868780488 190% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7748260879 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.846153846 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0769230769 5.23603664747 231% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111334884424 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460009450479 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571152627847 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840314996949 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694760800972 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 40.7170731707 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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