Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime. Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime.
To what extent do you agree?
It is true that the crime rate is increasing day by day. There are various of situation can be done by both hands. Government and people can make a huge role in decreasing the crime rate.
In my point of view, I agree that government can offer more forecasts to check on the minor area where criminals are living and this way police can know their places and it won't be easy for them to go out one's police is surrounded. In addition, the government should provide CC cameras, this way it will be tranquil for police to track where crime is taking place. For instance, shopping malls, restaurants, in the street and in a hotel. The government should also consist of some strict punishments, such as imprisonment, physical and financial punishment. These beneficial can marginally drop the crime rate in most of the societies and communities.
On the other hand, individuals can also help and teach adolescents about crime negative impact on society and try to talk and find out the piece of knowledge, why crimes are higher by most teenagers and young elders. Due to this reason, we can stop them with criminals action. However, eye-witness can also make a change to stop crime by reporting quickly in the nearest police station for the police to take strict action towards the crime.
To conclude, people and government can make a change to cut the crime rate, police enforcement is a great opinion but it won't make a much significant change unless we also do our job to fix crime rate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... and it wont be easy for them to go out ones police is surrounded. In addition, the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 262.0 196.424390244 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7213740458 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61340033547 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 106.607317073 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564885496183 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 283.868780488 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0442415205 43.030603864 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.083333333 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.23603664747 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 1.13902439024 878% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234635161503 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907454280702 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544947113573 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154943303008 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152781936918 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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