Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Information is becoming increasingly significant in many fields, so that some people reckon that information should be shared as much as possible. However, others may argue that some valuable information is not supposed to be shared without any condition. In my point of view, most information can be commonly shared while it is inappropriate to share some business secrets.
Information sharing can boost the development of scientific research, business and academics. This means that everyone can benefit from open information which may be useful for some us. For example, the discovery of a new material, which is light weighted and strong, may lead to a great progress in space technology. Besides, the process of sharing enhances the ties between researchers or organizations, improving their collaboration.
Admittedly, the passion for discovery may fade away since sharing would undermine a group of researchers or enterprises. A new research result usually requires long-term efforts, which are time consuming and expensive. As a result, if a medical company shared their cutting-edge medicine formula, they would be less competitive and even suffer destructive financial crisis.
In my opinion, business secrets should be reserved and other information can be shared openly. Because useful information is able to accelerate industrial, business, and academic progress whereas the reservation of some core information can keep the researchers of business organizations active and competitive.
In conclusion, most information should be accessible to the public, promoting the development in different fields. At the same time, some crucial technologies should be share on certain condition to maintain the passion and activeness of pioneers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'great progress'.
Suggestion: great progress
... light weighted and strong, may lead to a great progress in space technology. Besides, the proce...
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Line 9, column 170, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'shared'?
Suggestion: shared
...me, some crucial technologies should be share on certain condition to maintain the pa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, may, so, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 1.00243902439 1496% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 3.97073170732 403% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 965.302439024 156% => OK
No of words: 261.0 196.424390244 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75862068966 4.92477711251 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20909988989 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590038314176 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 283.868780488 166% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7162161575 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.357142857 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 3.70975609756 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363539372933 0.215688989381 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14144755516 0.103423049105 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921449728077 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2116096953 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108907189856 0.0819641961636 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 61.2550243902 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 11.4140731707 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 40.7170731707 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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