Some people think that children who spend alot of time reading children's story books are wasting their time which could be better used doing other more useful activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Children are said to waste too much time which should have been spent all on outdoor activities and sports instead of story books. Personally, I believe that time ought to be arranged for both extracurricular activities and story books since each of them is beneficial to children.
At the outset, comic trips bring children useful lessons from early age. Obviously, children's books are often fairy tales where good, bad characters and magic details exist. Therefore, after each story, children will acknowledge and imitate right actions as well as criticize evil deeds. Moreover, reading story books has great influence on children's future study. Specifically, on utilizing comic trips, the brain works constantly to imagine everything in the comic books, which makes the brain smarter and more sensitive. This is the vital key for infants to achieve success more easily.
However, children are not capable of pushing ahead only by reading story books. They need to take part in outdoor activities and play sports, too .Besides developing thinking and mind, physical training is extremely significant. According to The Wall Street Journal ( WSJ) - a famous American newspaper, there are 3 out of every 5 children suffer obesity, which indicates that the overweight rate in children seems to rise. To keep fit, what they should do is engaging in daily activities. Besides, by means of participating in physical recreation, children will have chances to meet more types of people. As a result, they will be more skillful in behaving and get more friends. For instance, a child who regularly participates in physical activities will be able to deal with various situations as well as communicate with people twice as well as children who stay at house all day.
To sum up, spending time on story books is not totally bad but time should be also used for outdoor activities. Only by this way, can infants develope comprehensively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 965.302439024 167% => OK
No of words: 313.0 196.424390244 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15654952077 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75044945597 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 106.607317073 182% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619808306709 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 283.868780488 176% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3062634703 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9411764706 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332431534821 0.215688989381 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952215161079 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635316658949 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196299589398 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198795995229 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 40.7170731707 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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