Some people think that job satisfaction is more important while other people think that a stable job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Amid the ever-changing life in 21st century, there are many people are faithful to an invariable life. On themcontrary, the others still keep their stand that the true value of life is to dedicate their whole life for seeking a suitable job in spite of difficulties. In the sphere of this essay, I will discuss both pros and cons of these views mentioned above.
On the one hand, a stable job is an option few argues with those who are in middle age, especially the generation X, because of its safety. it is undenied that repetitive tasks are extremely bored to the youth, vice versa, are considered to be an important duty to the generation X that they want to pay almost attention to build their home thank to a stable job. Furthermore, many fields require the elders due to they have more resistance, patience and experiences than the youth. Universities or hospitals for examples, the elders with well-experience are prioritized rather than others because they play important roles in both works and convey experience.
On another hand, the young generation is attracted by full-challenged job because they all desire to learn and taste more experiences. Besides, they believe that they only live once, therefore they dedicate their life to chase a suitable job to endeavor by their whole life. Though it is a desperate game which cause bad consequences for them, they consider that risk is a precious opportunity to develop. To have a stable job in the middle age, mostly the young generation need to overcome this difficult time. Nowadays, thanks to this context, a huge number of artistic designs ignited by the unlimited creations of the youth which have contributed to change global mind.
In conclusion, human only stick with their job by whole life once they’re beloved this job. I believe that dedicated to find a suitable job is not a nonsense for all the youth even they failed repeatedly. At least, the job I satisf is hardly make me bored since I came to the middle age
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, still, therefore, well, at least, for example, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 5.60731707317 660% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 965.302439024 172% => OK
No of words: 342.0 196.424390244 174% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8567251462 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 3.73543355544 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77699127062 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 106.607317073 176% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549707602339 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 283.868780488 189% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3112471098 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.733333333 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174209423086 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610601243237 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301225903543 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110580751524 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153589144898 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 40.7170731707 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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