Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the modern era, the good sport is a basic human needs and it is play a vital role in the individuals life. Some folks ponder that physical health power is more benefical for success in the games whereas, others deem that imaginative power is more important. According to my opinion, physical health has more importantance than others which I will discuss in the upcoming paragraphs.
There are a plethora of reasons about the physical stength has many benefits. First and foremost, health is a very essentail for humans life to servive in the world. If, the physical health of people is strong then they can increase the mental ability as well as, they will able to participate in the sports events. For example, every year many sports events is organised in the country at different levels such as national level, international level and many others in which the coach select the players according to the physical power of participants which help to acheivement of goals.
On the other side, some masses give the importance of mental power than physical power but the imaginative power of individual depends upon the physical power. For instance, people can think some moments in their life according to their physical stength if, the health of folks are good then, it helps to increase the imaginative power more and more. As a result, they are capable to play and enjoy the sports events.
According to my prospestive, a better health is first importantace for people to success in the sports. If, the health of players is good then they can do more and more practice to succes in their sports events as well as, they can judge their perfomance better and try to impove your weak feilds in the games.
In conclusion, physical and mental power both are important in the people life but according to my opinion, physical strength has more weigh than mental power.
- Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport while other people think that mental strength is more important Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
- The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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- The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 965.302439024 162% => OK
No of words: 321.0 196.424390244 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85669781931 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53082240836 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 106.607317073 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445482866044 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 283.868780488 171% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4346995767 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.923076923 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 5.23603664747 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308289777313 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110121214119 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816740090333 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192686953059 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807411985118 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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