Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Strength plays a vital role to become a successful sportsperson. A sportsman should be powerful in both the aspects mentally as well as physically. Only being physically strong will not help to achieve your goals in the game. In my opinion, a person who is mentally strong could be a better sportsman as the mental strength builds the capability to deal with critical situations and overcome failures.
Firstly, the person having a stable and strong state of mind is very much capable to handle the pressurized situations during the game. Being psychologically strong enables an individual to understand the criticality of the situation which helps in taking decision making.
For example, in the game of cricket, Virat Kohli the captain of the Indian cricket team is famous for tackling the most critical and pressurized situations. He has named so many records for performing fantastically while chasing the big targets when the team was under pressure. He would not be able to do so if he was mentally weak.
Secondly, A sportsman should have acceptance of failure. In sports the result could be anything, someday you win, someday you lose. To overcome your losses a sportsman should have a positive attitude and a strong belief in themselves. Failures can have a very bad impact on players with weak mindset, it may lead to depression and demotivation. To overcome failures, a player should have a fighting spirit that builds a strong belief that they can fight in any situation.
To conclude, mental strength is more important than physical strength for becoming a successful sportsperson. Physical strength is of no use if you are not able to deal with the mental pressure and failures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 126, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 965.302439024 148% => OK
No of words: 281.0 196.424390244 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06761565836 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88755334349 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 106.607317073 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555160142349 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 283.868780488 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5669074947 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174777681093 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624280419289 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881879868781 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110345339047 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11611270805 0.0819641961636 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 40.7170731707 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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