some people think that in this todays world getting older is entirely bad. however other people believe that the lives of older people are much better now than they were in the past. discus both views and express your own opinion.
It is often believed by some that old age is a very difficult period ever. Whereas others argued that elderly life has more advanced when compared to the past. I agree with the innovative changes in the lives of older people recently, despite it is inevitable to get old and to surpass the difficulties of old age is a dilemma.
On the one hand, there are many reasons why the people claim the difficulties of getting old. Firstly, after the year 60 most of the people have many kinds of diseases including physical, mental and social.After become old people needs support and care from others due to the physical and mental disabilities. Secondly, when people came to old age, may feel separate from children, and other family members due to work schedule and stress. Lonliness is the major impact of many elders and to overcome this crisis is a mountain task for most of the older people.
On the other hand, some people think that there are tremendous changes and modern technologies are helps to the elders in many ways. Governments and other organizations are develops extreme support systems and services concentrated to people over 60 years. For instance, geriatric support system provides old age pensions, free tickets in public transports and so on. Old age homes and charitable trusts organize life style support systems and provide physical aids to live independently to some extent.
However, in my opinion, more than the money and aids elders needs more support from their family and friends. Many people silently suffer the consequences and controversies inside the home after the retairment. children are busy with their world, and not have time to spend with elders and discuss some past world is often helpful to them. After the age 60 and more only many people are thinking about the life and that would feel them difficulty to surpass the every day.
To sum up, old age is a crucial and problem arsing years, and there are many ways to tackle this nowadays. however, in my perception, even though modern world gave many possibilities to them old age is one of the important time period in human.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Suggestion: Children
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Suggestion: the everyday
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Suggestion: However
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 6.8 324% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 965.302439024 183% => OK
No of words: 362.0 196.424390244 184% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87845303867 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 3.73543355544 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54031322764 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 106.607317073 174% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511049723757 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 562.5 283.868780488 198% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6505574274 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.882352941 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 5.23603664747 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212592500822 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753351951159 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431366654331 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123306612197 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051141983888 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 40.7170731707 204% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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