Some people think that women are generally more peaceful than men as their characters are naturally more nurturing than aggressive.
To what extent do you agree with this?
It is true, that women are more relaxed than men in many situations. It is because more and more women currently do not think about minor problems in life, however, men who work overtime and in extra hours are more tend to have outrage character.
In my opinion, I do agree on the fact that women are more peaceful in life than men, but, due to this reason, fewer individuals have a misconception; on women having more aggressive personalities because they are been terrified with house cores and their children, furthermore, many house wifes prefer to look after their kids rather than hiring a nanny. While men in their leisure time are more relaxed while watching TV or read a newspaper. For instance, Some psychiatrist has been said that " Women are more peacefully fine in physical and mental health because they are always interested to do morning workout to heal all their negativity and be active all day. On the other hand, men are always in a rush and most of all they skip the most significant thing which is a breakfast which makes their character outrage.
To sum up, In my opinion, men should have more leisure time and limited work hour to spend some time with their loved ones as well as, despite the fact, workaholic women are less stressed, to reduce their stress working women workout after or before their office hours.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion:
...nalities because they are been terrified with house cores and their children beca...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun house seems to be countable; consider using: 'many houses'.
Suggestion: many houses
... house cores and their children because many house wifes prefer to look after their kids r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, still, well, while, for instance, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73684210526 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45639096466 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592105263158 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.5312547533 43.030603864 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.285714286 112.824112599 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5714285714 22.9334400587 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 20.2857142857 5.23603664747 387% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374165147894 0.215688989381 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182026947548 0.103423049105 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661910753023 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256498248881 0.15604864568 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713668958314 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.2329268293 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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