summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table shows information about how many people used three major
British airports from 1998 to 2003.
In general, there were upward trends in the number of passengers of
Gatwick and Stansted while Heathrow saw a fluctuation over the period in the
question.
Looking at the details, as regards Gatwick, the figure started at 36.500.000
in 1998, and then went up gradually until 2002. Following this, the number of
users increased sharply and peaked at 69.300.000 in 2003. If we look at Stansted,
the trend was similar. The figure in 1998 was just 17.300.000, which was the
lowest of the three airports in that year. Having grown rapidly in the next three
years, it reached 43.300.000 before remaining stable during the last two years.
With respect to Heathrow, the figure started at 27.200.000. Then, there
was a sharp rise to 48.200.000 in 2000, which meant that its number of travellers
was more than other airports. Following this, it dropped rapidly to 33.200.000
and picked up again at the end of the period.

Votes
Average: 1.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, then, while, as regards, in general, with respect to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0523255814 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48589177624 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639534883721 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6665942028 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 3.83414634146 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00956771283426 0.215688989381 4% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00431099874799 0.103423049105 4% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.012932996244 0.0843802449381 15% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00380384552408 0.15604864568 2% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013714960081 0.0819641961636 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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