The table compares the different transport means usage level by a England person in 2 years (1985, 2000).
Overall, the total of distances increases sharply during the period from 1985 to 2000, while the car was the most popular mean people tend to travel.
Between 1985 and 2000, long distance bus was used to go out rose significantly, the average distance is more than double to 124 miles per person. Similarly, the England people want to travel by taxi more, from 13 miles in 1985 to 42 miles in 2000 by a person. By contrast, the trend for Bicycle and local bus were noticeable different. There were a decline in bicycle and local bus usage, by 10 miles and 155 miles by a person respectively.
In term of other transportations, the figures is slightly climb in 15-year period. Going out by car was the vast majority in both 2 years, 3199 miles in 1985 and 4806 miles in 2000. Around 124 miles was used by a person in 2000, while this figure for others means climb by 135 miles, to 366 miles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ifferent transport means usage level by a England person in 2 years 1985, 2000. ...
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Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'climbed'.
Suggestion: climbed
...ransportations, the figures is slightly climb in 15-year period. Going out by car was...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43728856693 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56043956044 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.6032012895 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.0 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167546834175 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769277365322 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705638997388 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122736665866 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506699237268 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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