the table display data about the emplyment in ten different industries, divided in three agre groups.
Overall, people working on area of manufacturing, local governement and education increase with age whereas this behaviour is reversed in retail and on the category others.
Manufacturing is the leading industrie on people over fourty years old with 23 employees, almost doubling the youngers ones, the same applies to local governetment with eighteen elder workers and just eight younger counterpart in the case of education this behaviour is seen in a lesser escale with 12 people over 40 years old versus 9 in the 18-25 years range. by constrast, retail have the most younger employees (23) almost three times than elders, the category other follow the pattern with 21 employees between 18-25 sightly over two times the elders employees.
the remainer cattegories keep a similar number of workers in the three ranges of age especially law with four workers in each group, the exeption are health and catering, both have more workers in the 21-40 years range wich is 15 and 8 people respectively
- The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries
- The table below gives information about the employment sectors in which people from 3 age groups worked 79
- the table below gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the table display data about the emplyment ...
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Line 5, column 216, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'counterpart' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'counterparts'.
Suggestion: counterparts
...en elder workers and just eight younger counterpart in the case of education this behaviour...
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Line 5, column 363, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: By
... old versus 9 in the 18-25 years range. by constrast, retail have the most younger...
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Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'younger' (without 'most') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: younger
...rs range. by constrast, retail have the most younger employees 23 almost three times than el...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...over two times the elders employees. the remainer cattegories keep a similar num...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15555555556 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67766251481 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616666666667 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.0388419041 43.030603864 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.6 112.824112599 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 22.9334400587 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101640709186 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061393503245 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390975117581 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742761533739 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308730042128 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 13.2329268293 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.0658536585 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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