The table below gives information about favourite pastimes in different countries in percentage.

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The table below gives information about favourite pastimes in different countries in percentage.

The given tabular chart shows the information about seven pastimes activities which is performed by age 30-50 years eight different nations. The data is calibrated in percentum. Which is clearly and coherently represented.
Overall, it is evident that Japan is only nation. Who performed an activity that is reading. As well as Japan has adopt highest percentage in reading.
It can be seen that, Canada is participated seven different activities but it has adapt highest percentage in T.V. In addition to this, England is participated in seven different activities but it has been adapt highest percentage in reading. Furthermore, In Australia T.V, sport, reading has 65,30 and 15 respectively.
As far as trend, is concerned that in USA are participated in all activities but it has been adapt least percentage in sleep. Apart of all this, England is participated in four different activities that is reading, hobbies, music and sleep. Ratherthan, In Korea nation hobbies, music, beach and sleep has 45,2,2,4 respectively.

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 50, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Who” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t is evident that Japan is only nation. Who performed an activity that is reading. ...
^^^
Line 2, column 114, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'adopted'.
Suggestion: adopted
...y that is reading. As well as Japan has adopt highest percentage in reading. It can ...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 114, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'adopt the highest'.
Suggestion: adopt the highest
...y that is reading. As well as Japan has adopt highest percentage in reading. It can be seen ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'adapted'.
Suggestion: adapted
...d seven different activities but it has adapt highest percentage in T.V. In addition ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'adapt the highest'.
Suggestion: adapt the highest
...d seven different activities but it has adapt highest percentage in T.V. In addition to this,...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'adapted'.
Suggestion: adapted
...en different activities but it has been adapt highest percentage in reading. Furtherm...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'adapt the highest'.
Suggestion: adapt the highest
...en different activities but it has been adapt highest percentage in reading. Furthermore, In ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: V
...in reading. Furthermore, In Australia T.V, sport, reading has 65,30 and 15 respec...
^
Line 4, column 94, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'adapted'.
Suggestion: adapted
...pated in all activities but it has been adapt least percentage in sleep. Apart of all...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 94, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'adapt the least'.
Suggestion: adapt the least
...pated in all activities but it has been adapt least percentage in sleep. Apart of all this,...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 126, Rule ID: APART_A_PART[2]
Message: Wrong collocation. Did you mean 'apart from'?
Suggestion: Apart from
...s been adapt least percentage in sleep. Apart of all this, England is participated in fo...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, well, in addition, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34567901235 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05562414189 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543209876543 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.5296421334 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7272727273 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7272727273 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0838407736714 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0256075593292 0.103423049105 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522312320945 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0539901054855 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542309009743 0.0819641961636 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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