The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981,1991and 2001.

Essay topics:

The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981,1991and 2001.

The given three circular chart compare the total expenditure of five different amount for are UK school in three years : 1981,1991and 2001.The data is calibrated in percentum.which is clearly and coherently represented.
It can be seen that,in the year 1981 the total school spending was ating fraction,and had been teachers salaries expenditure was one- fourth.Furthermore the total school spending other workers salaries during the year of 1981,1991and 2001 was 28%,22% and 15% respectively.
Secondly,In year 1991 the total school spending resources e.g books was 20% and next furniture and equipment expenditure was 5%. However, the total school spending teacher salaries during the year of 1981,1991and 2001was 40%,50% and 45% respectively.
Overall, during the year 1981,1991 and 2001 had been up to most school spending teachers salaries.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'chart' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'charts'.
Suggestion: charts
The given three circular chart compare the total expenditure of five d...
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Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'amount' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'amounts'.
Suggestion: amounts
...the total expenditure of five different amount for are UK school in three years : 1981...
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Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...hool in three years : 1981,1991and 2001.The data is calibrated in percentum.which i...
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Line 2, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...rently represented. It can be seen that,in the year 1981 the total school spending...
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Line 2, column 82, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...total school spending was ating fraction,and had been teachers salaries expenditure ...
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Line 2, column 141, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...rs salaries expenditure was one- fourth.Furthermore the total school spending other workers...
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Line 2, column 141, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...rs salaries expenditure was one- fourth.Furthermore the total school spending other workers...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , In
...28%,22% and 15% respectively. Secondly,In year 1991 the total school spending res...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 33.7804878049 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 722.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 126.0 196.424390244 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73015873016 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35036895883 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21578119319 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 106.607317073 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587301587302 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 186.3 283.868780488 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.520974136 43.030603864 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.4 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 5.23603664747 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265971552002 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165297374009 0.103423049105 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606702548604 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185623747411 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043761196282 0.0819641961636 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.25 11.4140731707 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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