The table below gives information about students studying in six departments in an Australian university in 2011

The table illustrates information about studen studying in six departments in an Australian university in 2011
Overall,non-English speaking and non-native students came in last, even though they made up the biggest percentage of Humanities students. Students who study both physics and information technology frequently switch majors within the first year of enrollment.
The fristly, with exact matching figures of 72%, 68%, and 56%, the fields of philosophy, education, and physics outperform other professions. Science comes in second with more over half. Additionally, with about 16%, the percentage of women who pursue technology and engineering ranks worst among the subjects surveyed. More than twice as many students in Physics speak English as a foreign language each year, despite the fact that only roughly 40% of students in Humanities and Education do the same.
The secondly, we can observe that, despite Physics' third-place ranking and Information Technology's second-last position in women's statistics, the proportion of international students makes up more than half of the equivalent. The ratio of these two faculties is almost twice as high as that of philosophy and education, which is another noteworthy fact.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , non-English
...n Australian university in 2011 Overall,non-English speaking and non-native students came i...
^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, secondly, so, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67027027027 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15092018746 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659459459459 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8932210923 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.125 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23910760473 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845214870863 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123288974282 0.0843802449381 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218751182667 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.261965120941 0.0819641961636 320% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 11.4140731707 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , non-English
...n Australian university in 2011 Overall,non-English speaking and non-native students came i...
^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, secondly, so, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67027027027 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15092018746 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659459459459 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8932210923 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.125 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23910760473 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845214870863 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123288974282 0.0843802449381 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218751182667 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.261965120941 0.0819641961636 320% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 11.4140731707 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.