I vehemently disagree with the notion that celebrities should consent to periodic public scrutiny of their personal lives. Celebrities unquestionably depend on the media to keep them in check and popularie them, but it's as crucial for the media to set its own restrictions and define its own boundaries.
The media idustry has historiacally experienced great growth, and because to manufacturing technology that makes it so simple to launch your own print or electronic mesdia business, many people without a foundation in journalism or regard for its principles have entered this industry. There mesdia professionals simply worry about making money, and they aren't scared to reveal information that can be extremely private to these celebrities. Without a doubt, some celebrities in want of fame stir up a little of controversy to get people's attention. Recently, celebrities have produced a lot of fabricated disputes in an effort to draw attention to themselves. Despite these circumstances, the Media does not have the right to be limitless and continually scrutinize the private lives of these celebrities. Celebrities are constantly under pressure to look stunning and live up to audience expectations. The photographers continue to observe these stars day and night, which is the hardest part . People find it difficult to unwind and feel at ease with themselves when they learn that they are under continual media scrutiny, which generates psychological issues for these stars because they are also people.
To conclude Media and Celebrities both work in a very closely knit environment.But each one of them should understand and decide the rules of the play and draw their boundaries before the things turn ugly
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...mply worry about making money, and they arent scared to reveal information that can b...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...day and night, which is the hardest part . People find it difficult to unwind and ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'peopled'.
Suggestion: peopled
...s for these stars because they are also people. To conclude Media and Celebrities b...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...work in a very closely knit environment.But each one of them should understand and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36900369004 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09480874285 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638376383764 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3206149004 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.272727273 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246566398073 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819986351349 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443766331057 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140593008378 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281446782875 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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