The table below gives information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in two cities in May 2007

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The table below gives information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in two cities in May 2007.

The tables show differences in the temperatures and daylight hours in Mumbai and Moscow in a particular weekend in May 2007.

Overall, In Mumbai, the temperatures recorded over three consecutive days were relatively consistent, whereas those in Moscow witnessed significant changes. In addition, despite being warmer, Mumbai enjoyed fewer hours of daylight compared to Moscow.

In Mumbai, the temperatures were nearly the same from Friday to Sunday, with the highest figure being 33 Celsius degree and the lowest one being 15 Celsius degree. The average number of daylight hours was approximately 13 hours, with the sun often rising at about 6 am.

Meanwhile, the temperature was much colder in Moscow. The maximum temperature during the day was 17 Celsius degree on Friday, and slightly lower on Saturday and Sunday, at 13 Celsius degree and 15 Celsius degree respectively, which were twice as low as the temperature in Mumbai on the respective days. The minimum temperatures recorded during this weekend were between 2 Celsius degree and 8 Celsius degree. The average number of daylight hours in this city was more than 16 hours, from around 5.30 am to 10 pm.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 410, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, whereas, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20634920635 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77526215139 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544973544974 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6598682907 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199011308362 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996046574792 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903346979457 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157091925366 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10365598752 0.0819641961636 126% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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