The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

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The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

The line graph indicates the comparison of the numbers of foreign travelers visiting three natural landscapes including the coast, the mountains, and the lakes of a country in Europe from 1987 to 2007. It is easy to be seen that all of them had an upward tendency; however, they increased differently.

The figure shows that the coast had the highest quantity of visitors travelling there in 1987, welcoming about 40 000 people. Five years later, in 1992, the numbers of passengers coming to the coast decreased slightly before rising to significantly to around 75000 people in 2007, remaining the most popular in three subjects reported.

In term of the lakes, starting at the lowest point, it had only 10 000 visitors in 1997; then, the numbers soared and reached the peak in 2002 with more than 70 000 tourists, overcoming the total voyagers of the coast at that time. After that, the figure of this destination dropped noticeably to almost 50 000 in the last year of the survey.

The mountains seen to changes less dramatically than two locations above. In 1987, it attracted about 20 000 foreigners, fluctuating through many years and finally interesting over 30 000 people in 2007.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9552238806 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6493273061 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63184079602 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5124699037 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176215051957 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687916756507 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718017749586 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103202939698 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568155069747 0.0819641961636 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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