The table below gives information about the temperatures and hours of daylight during the same weekend in two cities in May 2007 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The table below gives information about the temperatures and hours of daylight during the same weekend in two cities in May 2007.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The given tables illustrate the changes that have taken place in temperatures and hours of sunlight throughout the same weekend in two different cities in May 2007.
Overall, the average hours of sunset in Moscow were more than that in Mumbai, while the reverse data was seen in the sunrise hours in Mumbai. Additionally, in terms of temperatures, Mumbai was observed to be warmer during Friday, Saturday, and Sunday compared with Moscow.
In Mumbai, the maximum temperature fluctuated around 33oC during the day, nearly doubling the figure reported in Moscow. Moreover, the minimum temperature in this city remained stable at roughly 15oC, whereas there was a sharp variation in the figure for Moscow, at 5oC on Friday, 2oC on Saturday, and 8oC on Sunday.
Turning to the total hours of sunlight in both cities. It was not too significant in the average hours of sunrise in Moscow and Mumbai, which were approximately 5 hours and 6 hours respectively. Looking at the sunset timeframe in Moscow, the figure was higher compared with Mumbai in the same period, with an average of 19 hours in Mumbai and 22 hours in Moscow.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, moreover, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95767195767 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6673069694 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550264550265 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0760476507 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.125 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150125763834 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791480275582 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711217236997 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116825896898 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841489111261 0.0819641961636 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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