ome people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Being a moral citizen of society is one of the concerns these days to individuals. Many people assume that it should be the family where children learn to become good members of their community, while others believe that schools must take responsibility for this problem. As far as I am concerned, I strongly agree with the statement that parents should be people to educate their kids to turn into good residents for the following reasons.
On the one hand, teachers should focus on how to deliver the most quality lectures to their students. There are only eight hours a day that a student stays at school. Meanwhile, a lecturer has abundant knowledge to express to their pupils, from soft skills to hard skills. Putting several responsibilities on the school will create intangible pressures on teachers and reduce the quality of lessons brought to students. For instance, a timetable of a student in Vietnam has at least 7 subjects a day. Under that heavy intensity, it is difficult for instructors to add more information outside and still maintain the status of their course.
On the second hand, mothers and fathers are people to give birth to children and play a special role in their childhood. Before a kid has a chance to go to school, they have at least 2 years that stay by side their parents when they are so young. It is obvious that drawing a picture on a new white paper is much easier than doing the same on the paper that has already been painted.
In conclusion, I, personally, believe that parents take responsibility for teaching their kids to turn into good members of society. They have more chances and also more time than a teacher having too many things to educate their students at school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 358, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'peopled'?
Suggestion: peopled
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, still, while, at least, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78260869565 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62489183743 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578595317726 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8454171624 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.142857143 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197065204548 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648832781378 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757747235878 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124905516493 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0906663953672 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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