The table below gives information about the values (NZ$) of exports of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2012.
The table illustrates the comparison between the value of exports of kiwi fruit harvested from New Zealand to five countries, namely Japan, China, Mexico, Russia, and Saudi Arabia, from 2010 to 2012.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that Japan was New Zealand's largest export market during the period given. Additionally, while China's imports rose gradually and were the second-highest throughout the period of 2 years, and Russia witnessed a similar trend in China and ranked fourth, the value of exports to Mexico and Saudi Arabia decreased progressively.
Japan achieved the top spot, and this nation's figure for Kiwi import value was $271,000,000 in 2010, following an upward trend that skyrocketed to reach a peak of $325,000,000 in 2012. Likewise, New Zealand's export earnings from China's kiwi fruit market began in $74,900,000 in 2010, increased gradually, and finished at $94,000,000 two years later. Furthermore, Russia's import value started at $968,000 and grew dramatically to hit its highest amount of $2,404,000.
On the contrary, Mexico's figure for kiwi imports undergoes fluctuations. It began in $6,000,000 in 2010, fell sharply to $2,400,000 in 2011, and then recovered to $3,330,000 in 2012, which is less than the amount in 2010 by $2,700,000. However, this is still higher than New Zealand's export collections from China's kiwi fruit market by $926,000. Whereas it can be noticed that Saudi Arabia's import value decreased dramatically, from $290,000 in 2010 to $82,000 in 2012. Over the period of 2 years, the standing of nations that were New Zealand's crucial partnerships in the importation of Kiwi fruit was still the same as in 2010, with Japan taking the lead, followed by China, Mexico, Russia, and Saudi Arabia, importing the least amount of Kiwi fruit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'Zealands the largest'.
Suggestion: Zealands the largest
... can be clearly seen that Japan was New Zealands largest export market during the period given. ...
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Line 5, column 34, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Line 5, column 445, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...orts undergoes fluctuations. It began in ,000,000 in 2010, fell sharply to ,400,00...
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Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...gan in ,000,000 in 2010, fell sharply to ,400,000 in 2011, and then recovered to ,...
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Line 7, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... ,400,000 in 2011, and then recovered to ,330,000 in 2012, which is less than the ...
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Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...which is less than the amount in 2010 by ,700,000. However, this is still higher t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, likewise, second, so, still, then, whereas, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 965.302439024 153% => OK
No of words: 285.0 196.424390244 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18596491228 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65772739905 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 106.607317073 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 283.868780488 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.482926829268 1242% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9234398002 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.363636364 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26807721823 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135167689036 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112491332652 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221967412466 0.15604864568 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132219186267 0.0819641961636 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 40.7170731707 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'Zealands the largest'.
Suggestion: Zealands the largest
... can be clearly seen that Japan was New Zealands largest export market during the period given. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 34, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ly. Japan achieved the top spot, and this nations figure for Kiwi import value wa...
^^^^
Line 5, column 445, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ramatically to hit its highest amount of ,404,000. On the contrary, Mexicos fig...
^^
Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...orts undergoes fluctuations. It began in ,000,000 in 2010, fell sharply to ,400,00...
^^
Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...gan in ,000,000 in 2010, fell sharply to ,400,000 in 2011, and then recovered to ,...
^^
Line 7, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... ,400,000 in 2011, and then recovered to ,330,000 in 2012, which is less than the ...
^^
Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...which is less than the amount in 2010 by ,700,000. However, this is still higher t...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, likewise, second, so, still, then, whereas, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 965.302439024 153% => OK
No of words: 285.0 196.424390244 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18596491228 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65772739905 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 106.607317073 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 283.868780488 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.482926829268 1242% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9234398002 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.363636364 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26807721823 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135167689036 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112491332652 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221967412466 0.15604864568 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132219186267 0.0819641961636 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 40.7170731707 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.