Sending criminals to prison is not the best method to dealing with them. Education and job training are better ways to help them. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, it is undeniable that the increase in criminals has been a significant issue in civilization. With the development of modern society, some people argue that a jail sentences is not the best way to solve crime-related problems. To a certain extent, I agree that education is an effective method for reducing the crime rate. However, I also believe that punishment is also necessary to warn offenders not to commit the offence.
On the one hand, the idea of education and training for lawbreakers who are teenagers or misdemeanors is attractive for several reasons. To begin with, it is quite understandable why some people prefer training and knowledge for offenders because sometimes there are cases related to juvenile delinquency and only counseling and orientation can work for them. As an illustration, according to the BBC, which is one of the most famous newspapers in the world, many teens commit crimes because of a lack of general knowledge, so legal courses in schools and universities will help them to distinguish between standard and abnormal behaviour, and can reduce the crime rate easily. Additionally, as poverty is one of the causes of high crime rates, providing job training allows them to find a job. Thus, educating offenders may help them to integrate into the community and live a better life after they finish their punishments.
On the other hand, there is a variety of reasons why I consider that education is not the only solution. Sanctioning a criminal to prison is an efficient way to deter them. It is seen that there are several lawbreakers who take part in criminal activities purposefully, such as robbery, murder, rape, and so on. In that case, if the court does not take any strict action against them and just allows them to attend counseling, these kinds of people will continue to do the same things repeatedly. Therefore, prisons, even if capital punishment is essential to reduce the violence of crimes, which help citizens feel secure about the danger are eliminated. For instance, violent offenders who kill someone need to isolate themselves from the community, so jail is the best deterrent to their actions.
In summary, there are several measures to create a better humanity. While confining dangerous criminals in prison protects the community and ensures the safety of other citizens, education gives people a chance to be productive members of the country. I think that both methods should be given equal consideration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, i think, in summary, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2094.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14496314496 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97473905348 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562653562654 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.591737624 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.875 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4375 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298555602515 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858401894538 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618504815829 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153854703102 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408783736421 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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