The table represents the national consumer expenditure percentage of Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey on 2002. The national consumer expenditure is categorized on three. They are Food/Drinks/Tobacco. The table shows that the greatest percentage of the three categories at all of the five countries is food/drinks/tobacco.
According to the table, Ireland spends 28,91% for Food/drinks/tobacco category. It is higher than Italy, Spain and Sweden. The table shows that Italy spends 16,36%, Spain spends 18,80%, Sweden spends 15,77% for Food/drinks/tobacco category. The higest one is Turkey that spends 32,14% for that category. The percentage of Clothing/footwear category is smaller than food/drinks/tobacco category at the 5 country. The percentage of clothing/footwear in Ireland is 6.43%. Italy has 9,0% as the higest persentage of clothing /footwear category in that five country. Spain and Turkey are almost the same and they are a little bit higher than Ireland. We can see from the table that Spain spends 6,51% and Turkey Spends 6,36%. Sweden has 5,40 which is the lowest persentage of clothing/footwear. According to the table, leisure/education is not too popular in the five country. The table shows that the percentage of leisure/education is the lowest. Ireland spends 2,21% for the persentage of leisure/education. It is the lowest pecentage of leisure/education category after Spain that spends 1,98%. Italy that spens 3,20% for leisure/education is close to Sweden that spends 3,22%. Turkey has the higest persentage of leisure/education category whitch has 4,35%. According to the table, people of the five country mostly spend their expenditure for food/drinks/tobacco category. It is followed by clothes/footwear and leisure/education that has the lowest percentage.
- The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category - 2002 67
- it is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents for instance for sport or music and others are not. however, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. discuss both these views 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 965.302439024 159% => OK
No of words: 266.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77067669173 4.92477711251 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.97317201727 2.65546596893 150% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.398496240602 0.547539520022 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 283.868780488 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 8.94146341463 246% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.0883789409 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.7727272727 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0909090909 22.9334400587 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.0 5.23603664747 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.09268292683 391% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210722957204 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749484093971 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781868772699 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231683221343 0.15604864568 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101739893853 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 61.2550243902 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 10.3012195122 89% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.3 11.4140731707 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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