The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The chart illustrates three categories of products and services in terms of the percentage of national consumer expenditure in five countries namely Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in 2002.

Overall, the ratio of consumer spending on food/drinks/tobacco in each country was the highest, while the leisure/education had the lowest figures in the table.

It is clear that Turkey had the highest proportion of consumer expenditure on food/drinks/tobacco at 32.14% compared to that in Ireland and Spain with 28.91% and 18.80%, respectively. The ratio of consumer spending on food/drinks/tobacco was 16.36%, 2 times less than that of Turkey. Besides, Swedes consumed the lowest figures on these items with nearly 16%.

Moreover, the percentage of national consumption on clothing/footwear fluctuate from 5.40% to 9% with the highest ratio in Italy and the lowest in Sweden. The rate of expenditure by leisure/education in Turkey, which stand at 4.35%, was 2 times as much as that of Spain, which stand nearly 2%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...nks/tobacco was 16.36%, 2 times as less as that of Turkey. Besides, Swedes consume...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, moreover, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43125 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.59521709185 2.65546596893 135% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5779672799 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.142857143 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123498487423 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644191084253 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050427723434 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084568302943 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512647589126 0.0819641961636 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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