The table below gives information on the proporion on the carbohydrate, protein and fat in three different diet.

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The table below gives information on the proporion on the carbohydrate, protein and fat in three different diet.

The pie charts show the percentage of carbohydrate, protein and fat in three distinct diets. Overall, it can be seen that the most massive change if three diet types was carbohydrate and the most diminished was fat.
the greatest percentage of healthy diet for sport is carbohydrates, representing just three-fifths. The second is protein, showing only a quarter and the last is fat which get 15%.
For the average diet type, the proportion of carbohydrates obtains just under half, and also its protein gets 40%.The small rate is fat which is a fifths. furthermore, the healthy diet category, the amount of carbohydrates has 50% followed by protein which is less than a third. The end of the pattern is fat, illustrating only a fifth.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...rate and the most diminished was fat. the greatest percentage of healthy diet for...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...der half, and also its protein gets 40%.The small rate is fat which is a fifths. fu...
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Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a fifth' or simply 'fifths'?
Suggestion: a fifth; fifths
...gets 40%.The small rate is fat which is a fifths. furthermore, the healthy diet category...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...he small rate is fat which is a fifths. furthermore, the healthy diet category, the amount ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, second, so, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 33.7804878049 24% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 614.0 965.302439024 64% => OK
No of words: 124.0 196.424390244 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95161290323 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33699396548 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99891586377 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629032258065 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 177.3 283.868780488 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6138412206 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7142857143 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250895110435 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118620355291 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509354084792 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176607607101 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035716968214 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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