Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?
Nowadays, some people are more attracted to and adopt the fashion particular, clothing and accessories or goods due to their desire of aping others. In my perspective, i agree with this statement for some reason.
On the one hand, every single person always keeps pursuing aesthetic vive and fashion which is absolutely not an exception. Therefore, social media and advertisement are also factors that drives people wearing some types of clothes and the some kinds of goods especially young people. For instance, when some items assume trendy and fashionable, mustering development of entertainment industry, person usually c the celebrities who has new style.
On the other hand, sometimes people imitate fashion trends due to a basic person insecurity. Some people are worried if they do not do what others do or wear what other wear, people may become less self confidence or lack acceptable. For example, when people come to the event or party then they do not wear a new brand of fashion so that the people feel lack of confidence. As result up to date newest fashion or good be excepted for people
In conclusion, most people have a tendency to find acceptance and more important receive respect from the new style or goods that they woll be easy to get along with other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ire of aping others. In my perspective, i agree with this statement for some reas...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...e wearing some types of clothes and the some kinds of goods especially young people....
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Line 5, column 392, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'date the newest'.
Suggestion: date the newest
...eel lack of confidence. As result up to date newest fashion or good be excepted for people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95833333333 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65706459913 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9302082293 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5555555556 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0616902514413 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0275937065088 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277548010603 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0439813832717 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177939063792 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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