The table provided illustrates the amount of passengers departed in three Britons airports over the six-years periods. It is conspicuous that Gatwick was the most visited airport in almost all the years periods given. Additionally, it showed an upward figures trend from 1998 to 2003.
Specifically in 1998, Gatwick was visited the most by 36.5 millions of travelers a year compared to Heathrow that used by 27.2 millions and Stansted by 17.3 millions. In the next three years, all of the airports reported an increase in the number of its visitors. Surprisingly, Heathrow had replaced Gatwick to be the most departed airport in that year while Stansted remained the least visited airdrome among others.
In the remaining periods, the number of passengers used Heathrow declined gradually. Although it rose again at the end of the period, it still could not defeat the figures of Gatwick visitors which continue to increase up to 69.3 millions of people. The Stansted visitors remained stuck at 43.3 millions passengers until 2003.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 million'.
Suggestion: 5 million
...998, Gatwick was visited the most by 36.5 millions of travelers a year compared to Heathrow t...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...17.3 millions. In the next three years, all of the airports reported an increase in the nu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...illions. In the next three years, all of the airports reported an increase in the...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '3 million'.
Suggestion: 3 million
...ors which continue to increase up to 69.3 millions of people. The Stansted visitors remained ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at 43.3 millions passengers until 2003.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21556886228 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69542236614 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568862275449 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4115705393 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7777777778 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.77777777778 5.23603664747 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133740067517 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061955489072 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411306699745 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928551460073 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321456713399 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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