The table below show information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.
The table compares and predicts the contribution of seniors ( over 65 years old ) population in three distinctive nations namely Canada, Germany and the UK in 1988,2000 and 2030.
From an overall perspective, the elder rate in all three countries showed an upward trend and is expected to continuously increase in 2030. Throughout the surveyed and forecasted time, Germany has the highest proportion of seniors while the smallest percentage can be seen in the Uk.
Between 1988 and 2000, while Canada and Germany’s percentage of old citizens significantly rose, this growth in the UK was noticeably slower. To be specific, in the initial year, the fraction of people who are above 65 years old in German, Canada and the UK stood at 20.45, 16.32 and 14.23 percent, respectively. After 12 years, this figure improved by roughly 4.5 percent for both German and Canada; however it was merely 0.66 percent for the last nation.
By 2030, the proportion of senior population in Germany and Canada were projected to surge with the same speed in the past, reaching 30.42 and 26.35 percent in 2030, correspondingly. The UK, in contrast, was forecasted to substantially climb by 5.45 percent, considerably faster compared to 0.66 percent in 30 years before.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, while, as for, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1568627451 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8734857604 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.0085373654 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.285714286 112.824112599 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1428571429 22.9334400587 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122580848061 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586308397088 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058720446981 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869579290019 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605338363757 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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