The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.
The table reveals the percentage of people aged 65 and above in three different countries, namely Canada, Germany, Britain during the 12 - year period, starting from 1988, and the projections for 2030.
Overall, it is clear that the percentage of the German population aged 65 and over was the highest over the period. Moreover, the rate of those of all the regions mentioned in 2000 showed an upward trend, even in the projected year 2030.
In 1988, the proportion of citizens aged 65 and over in German was 20%, while the figure for that in Canada and Britain stood at 16% and 14%, in that order. A similar pattern was recorded in 2000 due to the proportion of the population aged 65 and over in the three countries with marginal growth. In particular, the German population rate reached the highest level at 25%, followed by Canada at 21% and the UK at 15%.
It is estimated that the proportion of the German population will gradually increase by 5% in 2030. The second highest in Canada will be just 4% less than in Germany. Meanwhile, the proportion of people in the UK will continue to be in last place at 20%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, while, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.605 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50957425109 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5048967996 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203761627137 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836281200329 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783887509086 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126752649391 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645152973694 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.