The table below show the percentage of female workforce and female managers in five countries

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The table below show the percentage of female workforce and female managers in five countries.

The table lists the information about the proportion of women labour forces and women managers where in five different countries.
The united states has the highest percentage of women workforce is 46 percent. Followed by australia, japan and Sri lanka which is make up 42 percent, 41 percent and 37 percent respectively. while the number of workforce in egypt is the lowest nearly twice of America (20 percent).
Turning to employment at management levels, The united states is still the leading in five countries constituting 43 percent and close behind it is australia which is 41 percent. egypt and japan have a similar of percentage women managers is 12 percent. The most striking country is sri lanka which has 9 percent meant of only one woman for every nine men in the managers.
Overall, The united states and australia have the most balance both workforce and managers while gender difference is the greatest at management levels in Sir lanka.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 191, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: While
...41 percent and 37 percent respectively. while the number of workforce in egypt is the...
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Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...41 percent and 37 percent respectively. while the number of workforce in egypt is the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e in egypt is the lowest nearly twice of America 20 percent. Turning to employme...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Egypt
...nd it is australia which is 41 percent. egypt and japan have a similar of percentage ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, still, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01886792453 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6739398855 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566037735849 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9782920662 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.75 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148138750978 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768818744471 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557292740423 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105203178209 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408544648043 0.0819641961636 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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