the table shows the monthly expenditures of an average Australian family from 1991 to 2001

Essay topics:

the table shows the monthly expenditures of an average Australian family from 1991 to 2001

The table compare information about the expenditures of Australians family over the decade period using dollar per month.
It is clear that there was a increase in total expenditures in australia from 1991 to 2001. However, spending for clothing and transport were decrease during the same time.
In general, the paying of other goods and services were the highest all of six categories from 250 dollar to 270 dollar monthly. Followed by food and house had a similar rise share of 5 dollar per month. Electricity and water had a striking rise with 45 dollar ( 75 dollar monthly in 1991 to 120 dollar monthly in 2001).
By contrasts, the table saw a go down for consumption of clothes which was from 30 dollar to 20 dollar every month. Besides, the expending for transport in australia had a significant drop from 70 dollar to 45 dollar every month.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...per month. It is clear that there was a increase in total expenditures in austr...
^
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
... highest all of six categories from 250 dollar to 270 dollar monthly. Followed by food...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...f six categories from 250 dollar to 270 dollar monthly. Followed by food and house had...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...and house had a similar rise share of 5 dollar per month. Electricity and water had a ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...y and water had a striking rise with 45 dollar 75 dollar monthly in 1991 to 120 dolla...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...water had a striking rise with 45 dollar 75 dollar monthly in 1991 to 120 dollar ...
^^
Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
... had a striking rise with 45 dollar 75 dollar monthly in 1991 to 120 dollar monthly i...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...ollar 75 dollar monthly in 1991 to 120 dollar monthly in 2001. By contrasts, the tab...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 84, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...onsumption of clothes which was from 30 dollar to 20 dollar every month. Besides, the ...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 97, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
... clothes which was from 30 dollar to 20 dollar every month. Besides, the expending for...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 197, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...ustralia had a significant drop from 70 dollar to 45 dollar every month.
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 210, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...a significant drop from 70 dollar to 45 dollar every month.
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 702.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 147.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77551020408 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61946281716 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585034013605 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.741664814 43.030603864 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.75 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235387929915 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117271807777 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897543255072 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163364669666 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562495550142 0.0819641961636 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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