The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods rice wheat and maize by people in four different countries

Essay topics:

The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods, rice, wheat, and maize by people in four different countries.

Details regarding the consumption of several basic foods, comprising rice, wheat, and maize, by people in Cambodi, Poland, Egypt, and Mexico in a certain period are depicted in the table.

It is noticeable that Egyptians consume the most calories from these kinds of foods, while the opposite is true for Poland’s firgure. Additionally, there is a difference between the favorite trends among the four surveyed countries.

Concerning rice, 1445 calories that Cambodian imports per day come from rice, are threefold that of Egypt, compared to considerable lower figures for Poland and Mexico, standing at 19 and 57 calories, respectively.

Turning to wheat, Egypt and Poland opt for it as the main calorie consumption, with 1095 calories and 865 calories per day, respectively; meanwhile, this trend is not popular in Mexico and Cambodi (at 275 and 18 calories)

Maize occupies the highest calorie consumption by Mexicans (1083 calories), followed by Egyptians and Cambodians, while Polish rarely use this kind of food.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, while, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43125 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83222941117 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6625 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.227646755 43.030603864 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.8 112.824112599 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 22.9334400587 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146685285857 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817821877001 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602694924746 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847314068919 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560361996702 0.0819641961636 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.2329268293 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 61.2550243902 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.06136585366 126% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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