A glance at the provided table shows the comparation of the way young male and female listening music over the previous month in Tokyo, Japan while the pie chart illustrates the results of the survey done by international company about people preference in listening live or recorded music. In general, it is clearly apparent that people worldwide were more likely to enjoy recorded music and young male in Japan surpassed female in three kinds sources of music than female.
Looking in more detail from the table, the percentage of young men listened to music from MP3-players, internet and lively were higher than women. MP3-players was the most popular source of music among male at 79% followed by live music and the internet at 20% and 55% respectively. On the other hand, the percentage of woman listening to music from that three sources only ranged from 40%-42%. However, women were tend to use CDs to listen to the music than men (22% versus 19% respectively).
Regarding the chart, globally, the majority of people (70%) loved recorded music while those who prefer live music only around one third. Finally the rest 4% of people worldwide did not have preference in listening to the music.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...anged from 40%-42%. However, women were tend to use CDs to listen to the music than ...
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Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...refer live music only around one third. Finally the rest 4% of people worldwide did not...
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Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e preference in listening to the music.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, look, regarding, so, third, while, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9504950495 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50780567528 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564356435644 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3815990182 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 5.23603664747 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42612298333 0.215688989381 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19184971194 0.103423049105 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152103840691 0.0843802449381 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.313133652283 0.15604864568 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153120739524 0.0819641961636 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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