The given table provide information about the ways young generation listened to music in Tokyo during the previous month. Meanwhile, the pie chart depicts the ratio of preferences whether to listen live or recorded music, according to statistics of a particular record company.
On a global scale, an overwhelming majority preferred live music, which was estimated to 70 percent. In fact, teenagers of Tokyo listened to nonrecorded music considerably less times. Thus, slightly under two thirds and less than half of males and females respectively favoured live sound. There was a tiny minority of people all around the world who struggled to choose a particular kind of music. Thereby, approximately only 4% of population was not certain of it.
With regard to recorded music, inconsiderably more than one quarter of listeners would rather purchase this type. By contrast, every forth male teenager out of five used MP3-player. Furthermore, roughly half of them listened to music by the Internet and fifth bought CDs. When taking women into consideration, nearly equal number of them chose electronic devices and web, which was about 40%. Surprisingly, insignificanlty more females utilized compact disks to spend their time by listening to recorded music.
Altogether, despite prefering mainly live sound globally, young generation of exactly Tokyo would would rather use devices in order to musically entertain themselves.
- Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? 89
- Nowadays some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works by using the computer Do you agree or disagree 67
- It Is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.Discuss both these views 56
- The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization.Why might this be the case?What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun times is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...tened to nonrecorded music considerably less times. Thus, slightly under two thirds ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 93, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: would
...ally, young generation of exactly Tokyo would would rather use devices in order to musicall...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, third, thus, while, in fact, kind of, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49545454545 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93007700234 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 106.607317073 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681818181818 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 283.868780488 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0634046093 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.75 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 5.23603664747 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327812974582 0.215688989381 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112910535164 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923190811941 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206649446212 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125726438253 0.0819641961636 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 40.7170731707 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.