The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group

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The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group.

The chart gives information about different age groups of people in New Zealand from 2011 to 2012.
Overall, middle and young people occupied most of the whole population of New Zealand in the 2-year period. The percentage of the elderly increased most and the percentage of other age group changed marginally.
People aged 15-39 were nearly 1.58 million and the figure for 40-64 age group was around 1.33 million in 2011. There were just 0.9 million people under 15 in 2011. This was almost half of people who were 15-39 years old. People over 65 were the least with only about 0.57 million.
The population of New Zealand increased slightly by 0.6% in 2012. People under 15 and aged 15-39 increased but the percentage of them fell by 0.2% in 2012. In the contrast, the percentage of 40-64 age group rose by 0.6% and the elderly occupied 4% more of the whole population in New Zealand in 2012, which was 20 times more than the rate of the young and middle age group.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61271676301 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20901533238 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479768786127 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 222.3 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7280001749 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 5.23603664747 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348295267951 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163295411708 0.103423049105 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15130809452 0.0843802449381 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273116172534 0.15604864568 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.167663920456 0.0819641961636 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.03 8.06136585366 75% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 40.7170731707 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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