The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.
The table gives information about, three different nations (Canada, Germany and UK) information and calculations about the change in proportion of the people who are 65years and beyond in 1988, 2000 and 2030.
Overall, it can be seen that the population of elders is predicted to rise in the entire period given. The highest percentage of older people was in in Germany, which remained at the top till 2030. The lowest figure of 65years old people and above was in UK.
In 1988, the figure in Canada of elders was 16.32 which rise almost above 4% in 2000 but it is expected to rise till 26.35 in 2030. Germany which was at the top of figure of senior people in contrast to two countries begin with 20.45 after next 12 years it reached to 25.32. This figure seem to incline in 2030 over 30%.
United Kingdom remained to be the lowest in the percentage of 65years and ahead which was under 15 percent (14.23% and 14.89% respectively) in 1988 and 2000 but it can jump into 20.35 after coming 20years from 2010
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... the change in proportion of the people who are 65years and beyond in 1988, 2000 and 20...
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Line 2, column 146, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
... highest percentage of older people was in in Germany, which remained at the top till...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53846153846 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2816690747 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543956043956 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6216105294 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.25 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123521309623 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523450883936 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450239578484 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788835722395 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523030664241 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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